What Tears - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2001-07-11 11:52 PM

What tears, the memories
that fall from my eyes
What tears, the memories
that drift upon the sky.
I followed the softend land
that came into my arms
leaving me to find my way
amongst the sailing stars.
I held onto my mind
so I could slip away
letting out my silent scream
upon the milky way.

What tears, the memories
that fall from my eyes
What tears, the memories
that drift upon the sky.
Letting in the savage heart
that scarred me long ago
hoping I would find away
at last to go alone.
Broken angels sing to me
their praises for the day
as I walk in solitude
trying to find my way.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2001-07-12 12:52 PM

MichaelG~

'I held onto my mind
so I could slip away
letting out my silent scream
upon the milky way.'

Oh ... this sounds so lonely~
Very well written.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

2 posted 2001-07-12 12:54 PM

sad and ethereal, surely you will find your way, I'm sure you're not completely alone

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

3 posted 2001-07-12 03:27 AM

Hugs2u4 sharing this heartfelt write...

*~coco~*

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2001-07-12 08:27 AM

sad.. I enjoyed the poem..and the flow.. nicely done!!

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

5 posted 2001-07-16 07:19 PM

I think I know I really like this poem

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

shadow974
Senior Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 636
Michigan

6 posted 2001-07-16 07:24 PM

Nice write, it's sad but inside we are all alone.

Do not fear going forward slowly,
Fear only standing still.

Marina
Member Elite

since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

7 posted 2001-07-16 08:13 PM

I really enjoyed this sad and heartfelt write. I think this is now one of my favourites from you. The flow seems to add to pain...

Wonderful write.

Marina

It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley

Jenn E
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 589
Kelowna, BC, Canada

8 posted 2001-07-17 08:15 PM

You a will never be alone MG........
A very sad write.....but as always very good..
As Always
Jenn E

ThUnDeRkYsS
Senior Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 727
Wisconsin

9 posted 2001-07-17 10:47 PM

This is so wonderfully written, love it

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.