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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Wrapped in the barbed wire of your words there are too many places to bleed too many wounds to salve with this small remnant of love torn from what used to be Each move only drives deeper or cuts anew I cannot escape these entanglements without scars |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
wow Ron, your poetry hits emotions so strongly.....I do love the way you write  |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
in coiled embrace stinging is all I feel... Well done Captain!.... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
too, too powerful, Ron Well done!! |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Definitely intense and dramatic. Amazing how when words are infused with tone, inflection, volume, body-language, and motive, they can be as you describe and worse... -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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