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A Word to the Wise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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A word to the Wise I washed my pride in the tears of my bride And hung it to dry by her side. But she wrung it through a manglers ride and That was the down of the up side. Now she has turned me a lower backside Even though I tried and I tried. So when I wash it's on the ebb tide and That is the up of the down side. As to the moral of this tale, Wash your wash in your own wash pail. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Seymour, is this "airing your dirty laundry"? Your poem glides now pass the Tide. "Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
RSWells, No just thought it sounded funny. LOL |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
take a word, what was heard turn it wise, and in my eyes a poem by Sy, reasons why I learn who's wise, through Sy's eyes... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
LOL, I like!  Maree You gave me innocence, |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
the words bounce along while you read.....sounds good when I read it out loud too neat one Seymour |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, You never stop shining. *L* Dark Angel, Good sense of humor. Thank you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sea, Like the waves of a sea you laugh on the shore. Thank you |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Yes, Sy, very funny in the whole of it, but this section is priceless: I washed my pride in the tears of my bride And hung it to dry by her side. But she wrung it through a manglers ride |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
VAS, I sort of liked that myself. thanks for the read and comment. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I washed my pride in the tears of my bride And hung it to dry by her side. =========================== Now she has turned me a lower backside Even though I tried and I tried. =========================== As to the moral of this tale, Wash your wash in your own wash pail. =================================== So the Rose of your suppose... is keeping ya on your toes This sounds like the work of Randy to me did he break out od his cage and fly free Me thinks your dandy dragon has you in the dog house again You better take your medicine like a man, this game you wont win Put Randy back in his cage and write her a pretty poem Tell her Randys to blame, sometimes he needs to roam If the poem doesnt work...give her a *winkiewinkie* No one can resist the charms of Randy and Sweet Stinky   LOLOH..and you need to change the title of this to a A Word FROMThe Wise   me |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Thank you my butterfly. Randy *L* |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
I couldn't help but chuckle at the moral of the story...wonderfully crafted! |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
Lol, this poem was great. And know i know the true power of wash pails, all thanks to you, and the last couple lines! ~*Freedom Is Not Free*~ (Korean War Memorial) |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Sy This one is great! Did she make you sleep in the doghouse too? LOL |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dulcinea, Thank you so much. Voiceless, Seperate wash pails that's what it's all about. Ariana, Worse than that, I had to do my own wash there too. LOL |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Clever in a "twisted" kind-of-way. -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mark, Is there another way. LOL |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i would do your laundry for you but i'm afraid you will then write a not-too-flattering poem for me..heehee |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Faterider, Thank you, it was just a tongue in cheek sort of thing. |
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