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. . . Will it last?
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. . . Will it last? |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Screams of passion Echo in the wind As we partake Of each other Beneath the stars. Restful snuggles, Whispering, Yet there are no ears to hear. Total unselfishness, One to the other. Will it last? Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth http://members.home.net/excalibur2501/Interloper.htm [This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 07-24-2001).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
will it last? retouch and see restir these feelings inside of me.......... |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Oh my....I do think it would.... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
good question... and very nicely done! Between the stars and this earth we share I floated on the lift of care |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
SEA ~ There you go, gal, back to that ole 4-5-4 format ... the SEAryu  soft touch offered old emotions stir sensational Lady ~ I do, too Ron ~ Heavenly bodies glow as we entwine and in ardor show our glistening bodies shine Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
with just your touch I let myself go falling again...... |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Very nicely done, For some it does last. Those stars I remember were beautiful. Do not fear going forward slowly, |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
SEA ~ tactile mapping tracing your contours memorizing Shadow ~ Yes, they were: Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
surely so, surely so! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
leaving bread crumbs for you to follow relish the trail....... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
VAS ~ Surely? I thought your name was Virginia .... SEA ~ the trailblazer eagerly follows expectantly Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Hiya InterLoper, my goodness I really liked this poem and I gotta tell ya something else that your replies to our PoetFriends are absolutely awesome... I adore reading these lil poems you reply and post they're sooooooooo cool, and maybe one day I'll learn how to write in that kinda format cuz it sure looks like I'd have a blast... Hugs2UpoetFriend *~coco~* |
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