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get over it already |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298
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Not responding this system is not responding, would you like to end task? yes, oh yes I breathe a sigh of relief eagerly press the button and wait for my missing you to shut off. Laughing almost giddy I wait for all to return to normal. Its about time, I say expectantly, I have got a life to live I can’t miss you forever. Moments stretch uncounted and all my efforts are rewarded with Not responding Cannot shut down this application, this system is not responding... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
extremely clever, extremely wise this is so gooooooooooooood! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
being one of the geeky types.. I find this amusing use of analogy.. being that I like to read poetry.. I find this a nice use being that I liked this... thought i had better say so.. |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
VAS and Cpat..thank you...and I guess I am geeky too...I work on computers for a living and thus...the analogy  |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Seems like this is the second 'puter poem I've run across recently.... I think you need to be defragged.... |
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