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Yours For The Taking |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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Tonight I need you to need me to touch......to hold to give ......and take with only whispers of want whimpers of urgency quietly confiding all your secret desires on breathy sighs need me tonight....... I am yours for the taking ~SEA~ |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Oh Katie, bar the door.... This will stay at the top for about 21 weeks..... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Ok... you win... ( laughing) Very nice..and I am sure it will be a hit with your hubby too.. |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
This is so very sultry and...inviting. *S* Wow. I hope you are taken well tonight SEA. |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Very passionatly written SEA, Lucky man is it that this is intended. Do not fear going forward slowly, |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
How can I take you when you are holding on to the bedposts ... wait ... are those handcuffs? Tch, tch, tch ... Oh, now I see, they are silver Navajo bracelets ... Whew ... To receive the gift of you, precious beyond measure, indescribable value. No man is deserving of this honor yet I have been chosen to be the one upon whom you will bestow such a gift. Undeserving though I am, I humbly accept. Let love begin ... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
you are pictured as such a sweet, pure young thing, yet you write such lusty romance there goes the book/cover adage I'm sure you're sweet though, and only lusty for your guy  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Invitingly luscious~ You go girlie~ Love it ! LOL ... adoring InterLoper's reply ! You go guy~ Love it ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed this Sea...James |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Sigh!….(thinking to my self – “Oh Lois…if you only knew what was under this suit!)…Sigh! I’m taking you Lois…right now!!…hmm! Anywhere you want to eat in Metropolis..I’m taking you…dinner is on me..uh!…Dinner with me! You choose…I’m ready!…Let’s go? |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Susan, this is just so sensual and perfectly expressed  Melissa~ |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Deca~  nice thought, but I doubt it LOL thank you Ron~ I have to hope he'll like it....LOL thanks PK~ thanks, I have a good feeling I will Shadow~ it's me that is lucky thank you Interloper~soooooooooo lovely, thank you!! VAS~ ROFLMAO!! it's that sugar and spice thing....LOL and yes, the hubby gets the lusty stuff Marge~ Interloper's reply was great wasn't it?! thank you James~ thank you Insect~ Lois likes spicey food  Melissa~ thank you very much ~SEA |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sea--very sweetly provocative! |
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Qumar Fatthi Member
since 2001-05-20
Posts 59Pakistan |
Tonight I need you i am in your heart why u r calling......... LOLO......... a nice poem........... you always write good poems........ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
SEA- A proposal he can't say no to. Very well done.. hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Imagine being invited to take a whole sea? wow! "Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve" |
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