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Take me, I’m yours
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Take me, I’m yours |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Take me, I’m yours Drown me in the deep Love you have to give, And forever to keep There’s always a Heaven Every time, in your kiss So anoint me with lips In which I wish to kiss Take me now I give myself to you Do what you want Anything you want to Breathe your love into me Go ahead and touch With hands that know, And a heart that loves so much You give beauty a voice And sweep me away Never to be blinded again By the light of day Eternal, like waves upon the water Like wind across the ocean Such is the thought of you, And the love that I am in Take me once, Like only you can do Take me twice, I give myself to you |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
a perfect example of one I wish I wrote...........*SIGH*  beautiful "Four be the things I'd been better without: Love, curiosity, freckles and doubt." -- Dorothy Parker, on herself [This message has been edited by SEA (edited 07-24-2001).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Take me, I’m yours Drown me in the deep Love you have to give, And forever to keep There’s always a Heaven Every time, in your kiss So anoint me with lips In which I wish to kiss ============================== Breathe your love into me Go ahead and touch With hands that know, And a heart that loves so much You give beauty a voice And sweep me away Never to be blinded again By the light of day Eternal, like waves upon the water Like wind across the ocean Such is the thought of you, And the love that I am in ============================ Take me twice, I give myself to you ========================== Are you trying to start a riot? *L*  Have mercy on us moths PK... man oh man do I love when you write like this *S* Beautiful, excellence from your pen. |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
You are away so long, then come back with promises like this... flirt! [love it!] Promise? |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Beautifully expressed! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Take me once and take me twice and take me once again, it's been a long, long time. Never felt like this before since can't remember when, it's been a long, long time. *Apologies* |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Anything you want to Breathe your love into me Go ahead and touch With hands that know, And a heart that loves so much You give beauty a voice And sweep me away' Outrageous write, PK...excellently expressed emotions and very gentle rhymes that flow perfectly...I truly enjoyed this! sp  it was love that first drew me, |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Aha...wonderful romantic expression...James |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Your voice continues to sing the songs that I need to hear. . . excellent. . . --------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Ooooh, I love this! Erotically beautiful, well expressed. Into my library this goes~ Melissa~ |
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ShannonM Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 104Drifitng |
Beautiful expression of surrendering yourself and your heart. ShannonM |
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