Open Poetry #15 |
someone to hold, someone to touch |
mpt Junior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 32australia |
someone to hold, someone to touch someone to be with, feel the rush a familiarity of ages, a new smile every day a person whos everything, in every possible way where is this woman, why cant she be mine? ive been waiting so long, am i next in line? i see her around the corner, i see her around the way i see her everywhere i go, every single day but she doesnt see me, not even a look which is why i put my loneliness, inside this book but my quest must continue, to find my special one so now i must leave you, it surely has been fun Though dreams can be deceiving |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah the search... hope you find what you are looking for... nicely done |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"someone to hold, someone to touch someone to be with, feel the rush a familiarity of ages, a new smile every day a person whos everything, in every possible way" I liked the sweetness of this |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MPT~ I like this line - 'a familiarity of ages, a new smile every day' Symbolic to me of having known one beyond the pathway we walk today~ Enjoyed~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading your poem...like the title...have hope because many women are looking for someone to hold also...James |
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