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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Eyes blue as last evening skies, becoming darker as early morning rise. Tell me a story I wanted to hear, your wish to hold me, close and dear. They say the eyes mirror the soul, returning the gaze, they are twofold. Fingertips gently touch my face, prelude to sharing a loving embrace. Time standing still for a little while, love being reflected with a tender smile. Two sets of eyes probing so deep, finding the love both want to keep. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
A delicate write, Logan... seems one can sense the deep understanding and love each has for the other in this one... -MVS "If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn." |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Logan~ Can we have multiple-choice for the eye color ? Pretty please ? 'Eyes blue as last evening skies, becoming darker as early morning rise.' OR Eyes as green as the grassy lawn Colored lightly with the dawn. OR Eyes as brown as a pup's Lighten as the sun comes up. And with that ... I pick green ! AND I love your poem !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
soft.....I like the romantic feel of this  nice Logan |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
A very revealing poem for you, my dear...Hmmm. Cor |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Thank you for your kind words, Mark. I appreciate your support of my few words..gentle smile Ahhh, Marge, geez, whatever you want, as long as they aren't red. You tickle me, gentle one..very gentle smile SEA, thank you for your comments,you always have such nice things to say and I appreciate all of them..most gentle smile Ahhh, Cor...a weak moment?.a tender gentle smile to a very dear friend |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
This was lovely, Logan. The eyes truly mirror the soul and allow us to view much throughout life. I like this one. Gentle and sweet, just like you. All writing comes |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
yes, gentle and lovely analogies throughout! |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
Logan Its very beautiful, full of rythm and love |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Logan, there is nothing quite as special as seeing that look in a loved one's eyes. Nicely said. Sandra |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very tender...and also very nicely done. I enjoyed! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
They say the eyes mirror the soul, returning the gaze, they are twofold. This one goes into my library! filed under "sigh"....  VERY lovely--soft and GENTLY romantic...SIGH with a smile |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Logan- What a beautifully tender render.. I love it..  hugs, ~vicky Marge- LOL @ you.. HUGS.. "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
My sister got the blue eyes in the family, mine are earth brown! I sure enjoyed this!"It's easier to kill love than to nurture it" Fred Hardesty |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
I do believe the eyes have it in this tender write.... well done, Sir... |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
*sigh* lovely....very romantic write Logan makes me wish I had some eyes to gaze into right now...~Krista  |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*sigh* beautifully done...and so soft and tender written..love it. Charisma |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Logan, The eyes are the door That opens to more. Enjoyed |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Logan--This tender writing is so romantic! |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
I have to agree with everyone else. This is a wonderfully romantic poem. Very beautiful. Dawn |
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