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Sunset Inspiration (for robert)
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Sunset Inspiration (for robert) |
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Constance Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 393Ohio 
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Sunset Inspiration (for robert) _________________________________ in the twilight- colors. as I learn about you twilight colors become you your thoughts, feelings inspire palest sweet pastels awash in reflected color touched by the waning sun and now your voice delightful in twilight memory hints of strength and confident in the last deep pure color unique tonight and forever and should I ever see your face touch you it will bring again this beautiful tinted twilight and the day's last vivid streaking streams with which the day proclaims its sweet surrender and mine |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Constance~ This is lovely. If Robert enjoyed the imagery of your sunset as much as I did ... you just made two people smile~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Constance Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 393Ohio |
Marge, yes he smiled woohoo! Glad you did too. (but not for the same reason),giggle. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Softly pleasant... Twilight's my favorite time of day, so I appreciate the colors depicted and thoughts elicited. -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yes nice thoughts and very nice imagery... I enjoyed and think Robert had several reasons to smile.... nicely done! |
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Constance Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 393Ohio |
Mark, thanks for seeing it. I grew up in AZ. where the sunsets are consistantly gorgeous,(I learned that this is so because of all the tiny sand particles in the air), but that's just not romantic is it? Cpat-glad you liked it, and yup.wink. |
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