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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2001-07-24 06:52 AM

Probing

I want to kiss something new.
Perhaps the essence of you.
I want to probe a little
deeper into your heart.
Break down those barrier's
that are keeping us apart.
The desire keeps stirring
from within my heart.
If you find this agreeable
when can we start?

Jameslee@July24,2001

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-07-24 08:43 AM

nice desire..to be closer still..find the layers underneath and know another person..

nicely penned

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2001-07-24 09:55 AM

James,
Cute, enjoyed

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

3 posted 2001-07-24 10:11 AM

It would be
so incredibly sweet
to offer you keys
to the heart of me

free...

Nicely done, James

*smiles*
~Tier

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

4 posted 2001-07-24 10:13 AM

enjoyed the read and got a titillating giggle from the last line

KokoStewartKoomoa
Senior Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii

5 posted 2001-07-24 10:42 AM

no need for keys to this heart of mine
for freely is it given
to the one who writes with softest rhyme
for only by love it is driven.
Very nice and romantic write, James!
Aloha pumehana, my friend!
I hope this poem is indicating a change in your life

for the better.....

be happy. I enjoyed seeing this poem...smiles, Koko

Aloha with warmest regards, Koko
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[This message has been edited by KokoStewartKoomoa (edited 07-24-2001).]

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2001-07-26 04:06 AM

Thank you Cpat Hair, Seymour, Tiersdin, Vas and Koko for the nice responses...James

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

7 posted 2001-07-27 11:49 AM

I hope the response you got was just as candid as the question ... and positive

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth
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SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

8 posted 2001-07-27 03:16 PM

Ah...a very gentle probe James. I hope too that you got the response you were looking for

very sweet write!
~Krista

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you.
And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
~Winnie the Pooh

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

9 posted 2001-07-27 03:41 PM

well done James....a sweet write!

Nathan

Effigy
Member

since 2000-04-11

Posts 486
disbelief

10 posted 2001-07-27 04:38 PM

nice.

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