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Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-07-23 10:52 PM

How sensually your finger travels
around the outline of my face
as it meanders over the soft pillows
of my eyebrows and down the valley
into my eyelid

The journey continues over the gentle
rise of my cheek then over the bridge
of my nose down the slope
as it reaches the other cheek
The fullness of my lips welcomes
the delicate touch of your fingertip
as I gently reward this traveller with a kiss

More time is needed to further trace
the outline of my lips before you complete
the journey around my face
Gently you place your hand on my chin
and turn my face towards yours

I begin my own journey as my quest is to
discover where your smile begins and ends
As I lose myself in the pools of your eyes
where I dwell in the brightest shade of blue
I lean over and kiss you ever so tenderly

In a passionate embrace we remain
suspended in time
lost in our love
a part of one another
two hearts
one soul

Suetang

Mike
Member Elite

since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

1 posted 2001-07-24 12:14 PM

yep, that was some journey, enjoyed.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2001-07-24 08:49 AM

the best kind of journey... and one you penned with softness..grace...and feeling

I enjoyed

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2001-07-25 02:49 PM

I love it! Wonderful write, Sue.

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

4 posted 2001-07-25 05:04 PM

How I Love this kind of write .... you can see them and feel them gazing into each other....

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

5 posted 2001-07-25 07:08 PM

This is so sensual, but innocent. Most people don't even look at each other any more. This connection is precious!
Sincerely,
Rwood

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

6 posted 2001-07-28 11:30 PM

Thank you for joining me on this journey.
Take care....Sue

Suetang

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

7 posted 2001-07-30 11:08 AM

A weekend trip worth planning! Beautifully tender and sensory.

-MVS

"When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said."
--Del Casher

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