Open Poetry #15 |
Because Of You |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
You saw the pain behind my weak smile You saw the sadness within my eyes You felt the aching in my heart And you sensed the emptiness in my soul Now because of you ......... The pain has disappeared as my smile has now returned The sadness has dispersed and now my eyes - how they shine The aching in my heart has healed as it now plays a different tune And my soul is full of love and compassion All these things have happened because ........ you gave me confidence you believed in me you trusted me you inspired me and most of all you loved me Suetang |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I truly don't believe one person could do one other person so much... with such a wonderful outcome... well done Sue! |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'All these things have happened because ........ you gave me confidence you believed in me you trusted me you inspired me and most of all you loved me' Beautiful lines, Sue...I truly enjoyed the emotion in this...nicely done... sp it was love that first drew me, |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Sunshine I am very fortunate to have some very special people in my life. snowpants I'm so glad you liked this one and thank you for taking the time to read it. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
lovely read, Sue..very gentle smile..if it could only happen for everybody |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Suetang- What lovely thoughts you've penned here.. It certainly is a blessing to have people who truly love and care about us isn't it? Nicely done.. hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing Sue...James |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
If even for a brief moment, to be able to bestow such things unto another and have them freely given by another... not too many other things to truly define the word "successful"... -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Thanks so much everyone for all of your kind words. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
So very sweet and uplifting...a beautiful write! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Ain't love gr8? Well done. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Sue, how heartwarming this is...makes me want to pen some tributes of my own...grins |
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