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Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

0 posted 2001-07-23 03:34 PM

she notices her tear
in the reflection of his eyes
damn the mirror that he holds
up for her at times like this
she didn’t ask him to
but it’s something that he
can’t help but to do
it’s what he’s always been
he’s always been the one
that lets her see herself
as she is, as she was
as she would like to be
her words reflect back to her
on the membrane of his soul
because it’s the only way that
he can get her to understand
the only way that he can
help her to grow, to change
to be the woman that he knows
is within her heart
the woman that she would like to be
this is what he shares with her
this is the reflection that she sees
the obsidian reflection
of his eyes

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

1 posted 2001-07-23 03:38 PM

This is very beautiful and touching Sven.....brilliant writing!!!

Nathan

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2001-07-23 03:49 PM

beautifully done... always a pleasure Sven to read your words..

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2001-07-23 03:53 PM

Sven,
You keep getting better and better. Enjoyed

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

4 posted 2001-07-23 03:57 PM

Sven, I am in awe as your words touched my heart very deeply. Thank you for sharing this keeper.

((hugs))
Charisma

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

5 posted 2001-07-23 04:26 PM

WOW! Insightful piece my friend. Truly enjoyed the read.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-07-23 07:01 PM

Thank you for your wonderful replies my friends. . . they are truly appreciated. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

inot2B
Member Elite

since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

7 posted 2001-07-23 07:05 PM

"because it’s the only way that
he can get her to understand
the only way that he can
help her to grow, to change
to be the woman that he knows
is within her heart
the woman that she would like to be"

Oh Sven this is such a beautiful gift that man has offered his woman.

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

8 posted 2001-07-23 07:18 PM

Beautiful Heart writes again!

Do I really have to say I love this?

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

9 posted 2001-07-23 07:29 PM

Another jewel for the romance poet.
As always, this is wonderful. Lots of things happening within it.
Sandra

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

10 posted 2001-07-23 08:27 PM

Sven, a very strong, good read...but I think there are a couple of small areas where you can tighten it up just a little bit...

now...quit reading my memoirs....

Very good. VERY good!

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