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A Love Throughout Time
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A Love Throughout Time |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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An attempt at summing up the worlds greatest love story. Her photo drew him in, before he ever knew the scope of loving felt, nor how to make it true. In searching for advice, he came upon a plan his dream, to conquer time, reverse hourglass sand. He woke in her hotel, to find love born of fate "Is it you?" she exclaimed, "the one for whom I wait?" "Yes my love it is I, come through portals of time traveled so many years, your true spirit to find". As she clung to his arm, they walked down to the lake she could not deny him, though her heart would soon break. They planned for a love to caress them throughout time until it was shattered at the turn of a dime. Abruptly he spun forward, back to his own year leaving behind his true love, all that he held dear. His shock was so great, he had to lay down and die to reunite with Elise, in heavenly sky. [This message has been edited by catalinamoon (edited 07-23-2001).] |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
I wish Cliff's Notes were this beautifully written when I needed to cram Shakespeare, way-back-when... -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." --Del Casher [This message has been edited by MARK V SHELDON (edited 07-22-2001).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice catalinamoon...James |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, then Elise had to be the reborn of the greatest love he had..all the planes are there, all go forward in time...very nice write, ...very gentle smile |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh, lil sis..... This brings back the most beautiful story I have ever known.... What a wonderful writing this is!!!! What a beautiful love story for us all!!! The road goes on forever, and the stories never end... |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sandra, This is pure magic. No one could have written a more enchanting tribute to a film that has touched so many. You've delved into the quintessetial essence of what this story truly represents. I really loved this. This will go in my "Time Travel Romance" library for all time... Love, "Elise" |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I do believe that you have summed it up just wonderfully and still captured all it's essence. Wonderful write from you for sure. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I would say my friend. . . that you have done the story well. . .  ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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