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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-07-22 09:16 AM

Droplets of Dreams

I pour my dreams
in a tall clear glass
watch them bubble
impatience to surpass
stir with my finger
I mix them well
elixir of hope
a magic spell
lean over to take
a quick sip
how sweet and quenching
to my parched lips
amazing to me
a drink both hot and cold
liquid so thin
yet a taste so bold
equal mixture of
sun rays and moon beams
such are the droplets
of my dreams

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2001-07-22 09:37 AM

Slick,
I wouldn't mind a cup of that. Enjoyed

g-hm
Member

since 2001-05-16

Posts 85

2 posted 2001-07-22 09:54 AM

What a powerful drink, need that recipe.
Could stand a sip today myself.

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

3 posted 2001-07-22 10:09 AM

what lovely, delightful thoughts!

droplets of dreams mixed with elixir of hope

very enjoyable read!!

**lost**
Junior Member

since 2001-07-16

Posts 32
ma

4 posted 2001-07-22 01:56 PM

very good choice of words. it shows the difference in experiences,, the ups and downs to be trite. it relays a powerful feeling. it shows hope for the future. it is very optimistic even. i dont really know how to respond except that i very much like this. it is great

confused among strangers,
lost amongst myself.
**lost**

shadow974
Senior Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 636
Michigan

5 posted 2001-07-22 02:14 PM

Wonderfully done.

Do not fear going forward slowly,
Fear only standing still.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

6 posted 2001-07-22 02:30 PM

Could I please join you in a cup of this? Sounds wonderful to me. *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

7 posted 2001-07-22 05:24 PM

An awesome write, Helen, it's a keeper~

Melissa

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

8 posted 2001-07-22 08:01 PM

make a pot I'll be right over

" I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis"

Kathleen

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

9 posted 2001-07-22 10:56 PM

May all your dreams come true, Helen. This was lovely!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

10 posted 2001-07-26 09:09 AM

sounds like quite a drink...

I enjoyed!

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

11 posted 2001-07-27 12:02 PM

Bottle it and you will make millions

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth
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