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Simple Little Love Thoughts |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada 
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~* Just Simple Little Love Thoughts *~ This is a vintage story of love, needless to say, He’s coming to call, as that was the way. Out in the rose garden the young lady sat, As he approached her and took off his hat… She, “I can’t catch my breath, my heart’s beating so fast, Was this meant to be, will this romance last? I’m trying to be so reserved, I’m going to burst! I swore I would never fall in love headfirst!” He, “Look what your tender love has done to me. I was lonely, now you’ve set my heart free. You looked into my eyes, and saw my soul, Knowing instinctively how to make me whole.” She, “When I dare to glance up into your eyes, I sail all the oceans, and fly all the skies. Your words, your touch, awaken my desire, Come enter my soul, and seek passion’s fire.” ”Our love continues to grow like a blooming rose Will it last; there is only one in heaven who knows. And along our way there might be a thorn, But that is how the most beautiful rose is born.” He, “Like a climbing vine I will weave through you, Encasing your gentle heart so soft and true. You are my weakness, my strength, For your love, I would go to any length.” “I know you’re my soul mate as well as my friend, I could spend every day with you ‘til the end. I could look into your eyes for the rest of my life, I could definitely ask you to be my wife!”  And when the day began to hide under a silver moon, Two lovers kissed and wondered was it too soon. Too soon to risk sharing the rest of their life, Happily married to each other as husband and wife. ~*~ Mysteria ~*~ © July 2001 art from cards music: Once Upon A December ~ You do this dance only once ~ [This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 07-22-2001).] |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, how very lovely..the pics, the music, and most of all your wonderful words, so well flowing togethers..very gentle smile |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Beautifully romantic. enjoyed. Do not fear going forward slowly, |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
This is just lovely Mysteria, words and music. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
thank you for this treasure! |
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AJ MacNeil Junior Member
since 2001-05-02
Posts 40 |
*sighs* ... you romantic you !!!! ... this is lovely Sharon *smiles and hugs* |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
YES THIS IS A LOVELY ROMANTIC POEM..I LOVED IT! ALOHA  KokoAloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Mysteria, your choice of music to send your words along is just amazing....a lovely read, a welcome sight... and a joy to my ear! Thank you! |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
There is nothing "simple" about your "love thoughts" Sharon ... beautiful and tender sentiments of love and anticipation, much enjoyed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful writing Mysteria...James |
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Flutterwings Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 288Maine |
Sharon, you have a romantic  that shows in all of your writings. How about sharing your inspirations and ambiance with your public and write a book....? A creative write with much passion. :love ya ((~.~)) |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Quaint aint gonna get it, much more should be said. Amazing how this forum can be used and you are becoming masterful at discovering ways to communicate poetry in a new way. One of my teenage daughters came running into the room at the recognition of the music (new to me). Very cool Sharon. "Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve" |
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Martha Cowan Member
since 2001-03-08
Posts 240Groves, Texas |
Sharon...I couldn't think of a more lovely way to begin my day then absorbing these serenely beautiful thoughts into my mind. So gracefully and tenderly reflective of the vision of how true love was meant to be. ~*~huuuuuuuuuggggeeeee siiiiighhhsssssss~*~ Hugs, and much love to you, dawn |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Very romantic. It isn’t too soon when both recognize the moment you so elegantly described. Melton |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Love??? SIMPLE??????????? I think not!!! This however was simply beautifully put. I loved the way it brings the beauty of love into each verse. Wonderful write and love the subject of course. |
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kismetkelsey Junior Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 32Canada |
What a beautiful romance Mysteria!Loved this!!~Smiles~Cheryl |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Very beautiful thoughts! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
 ,Ahh...I see we have some romantics in the house? I am so glad you liked this. I went away for only two days, and how nice it was to came back to all of your wonderful thoughts and comments, thank you so very much ~ Logan, Shadow 974, Titia, Irish Rose, Andy, Koko, Sunshine, Kit, Maggie, Richard, Dawn, 2dalimit, Vandana, Mark, Cheryl and Walker. You guys are the best!~ Give the heavens above more than just a passing glance ~And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance ~ I hope you dance. (Lee Ann Womack) [This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 07-23-2001).] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Sharon- Sorry I'm so late getting here.. This is absolutely lovely...what beautiful thoughts you've penned, my friend.. Love it..  hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Opp! James Michael I left you off my thank you list last time - mauh! Thanks so much. Vicky - As you can see a tad late myself, with a little 3 year old fairy and her friends for the weekend! Thanks for reading. ~ Give the heavens above more than just a passing glance ~And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance ~ I hope you dance. (Lee Ann Womack) |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Sharon--This was just lovely..I love love when it's done like this..in the old fashioned, true way. I wish I could hear the music. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Lovely, just lovely. {sigh} |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ah Martie, me too...I love love! But, I love love presented in an old-fashioned, respectable, caring, shy kinda way too. The music is Once Upon A December from Anastasia (hum it) lol, it will work! Thank you for reading this ditty. Interloper: I actually sighed while I did it, lol. Thank you. ~ Give the heavens above more than just a passing glance ~And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance ~ I hope you dance. (Lee Ann Womack) |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Oh Mysteria! This kind of love is so wonderful...you spelled it out nicely! I feel that way about my husband and hope to always feel that way...thanks for the reminder! Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Cindy, that kind of love is there for everyone. It takes so little to have it, and so much to keep it! May you always feel like that, always. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Sorry, did not see I already did a thank you to Cindy and this wuld have been a duplicate one. ~To see real beauty you must look with your heart~ ~* Mysteria *~ [This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 08-03-2001).] |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Oh how I wish. To be in that time period, to know what love used to be. It's sad when you think that our present, young love, is riddled with tattoos and piercings and swapping things, instead of old fashioned longing and sharing of dreams. Sorry, I had to reflect. Wonderful read Mysteria! |
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maeve Member
since 2001-08-01
Posts 139In the Outback |
This is just so beautiful, Mysteria. Words fail me Maeve Take me back to Erin's shores, |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
rwood: Oh but if I could go with thee! Thank you. maeve: I am so glad it pleased you, thank you. ~To see real beauty you must look with your heart~ |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
May the ideal never die... Beautiful, alluring, and captivating, as always, Sharon. -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Mark - Thank you and I agree - romance will last forever! ~To see real beauty you must first look with your heart~ |
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