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My Final Resting Place
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My Final Resting Place |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
If I should die, I do bequest, if kindly would, at my behest, please bury me, out at the mall, so winter, summer, spring and fall, all the people, that I hold dear, will at my side, be ever near. |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Please forgive me, but I can't decide whether you are being serious or not. An interesting concept, though. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Are they all out spending your hard-earned money? Let's you and me go walking in the fields...even if it is hot...we know where we belong! |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
But you'de be spinging up daisies in the shoe department! That's no place for a writer! Let them eat cake! Love this and hope it is not serious  Sincerely, Rwood |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
ROTFL  Good one, Mike! Very cute! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Very tongue in cheek, Mike. All writing comes |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
I like this  Very good.Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Is the mall air conditioned?...  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Mike- When you are clever, you are very, very clever!! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
{grin} Forever malling ... what a concept |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mike~ Your wish for the mall as your resting place sits well with me with a grin on my face~ As best I can recall the greatest bargain I ever sought was your humor for FREE~ Can't be bought ! ! Just a'pickin and grinning~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
LOL There is definately a statement in this piece. LOL Marilyn |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
This is funny..yes because they might not have time to visit you other wise ha..good idea.. ~Victoria~ |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
I do hope this is in jest, because I have a silly grin on my face.  Deb |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
now I liked this, oh yes, very tongue in cheek and very much a surprise " I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis" |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
yep, go where the action is soooooo that's the way to go, eh one set of my friends would come if I was by an all-you-can-eat place...unless it'd ruin their appetites |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Mike- LOL...you amuse me, sir. Thanks for the giggle.  hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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