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Sunflower....Tanka |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages 
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 Attractive petals Border of golden treasure irresistible Sunflower’s delightful heart Bee there at the right moment Charisma ~*TMP*~ 21/07/01 |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Such a cute cheerful poem of honeybees and the golden glory of sunflowers! (smiles) I saw the vision in my head reading this, it is soooooo beautiful! (smiles) Thank you so much for sharing this sweet vision with me! You have such a beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Lovely picture and tanka...beeutifully done  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Charisma, A nice Tanka and your welcome. LOL enjoyed |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I love sunflowers! Thank you for a preview in another month of so of seeing them bloom! " I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis" |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Mistletoe Angel:it was a pleasure to share this one with you Noah....thank you for your cheerful words and your smile my friend Poeminister:thank you my friend Seymour Tabin: Great to know that I'm welcome I'll bee there at the right moment...my friend Irish Rose: they are truly lovely flowers thank you for your comment |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Real nice tanka Charisma, thanks. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Enjoyed this, Charisma, the pic compliments the words nicely... *smiles* ~Tier |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Wonderful! Delightful final line, too!!! Where've you been, haven't seen one of yours here for awhile. Vacation??? |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Well this sunflower lover loves this tanka!  Well done!~Melissa~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
I have to say I love all your nature poetry and this is no exception. Well done! All writing comes |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Titia: Thank you for the nice Tiersdin: Glad you enjoyed....thanks for your lovely reply. VAS: No I wasn't on vacation, My dear friend I was around so now and than....but well I thought that nobody would miss my writings. But I'm glad that you enjoyed my tanka. Melissa: thank you sunflower lover Lone Wolf: I take that as a great compliment ....thank you my friend. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Charisma- This is lovely.. Very nicely done...I enjoyed it much.. hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
You know how much I like this form and you used it magnificently Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth http://members.home.net/excalibur2501/Interloper.htm [This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 07-23-2001).] |
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