Open Poetry #15 |
Snow Dragons…. part IV |
EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Snow Dragons..... part IV The Reckoning An apprehensive glance, aghast at the apparition of love's lost past Wife lay before him, dying, shedding Dragons tears, uttering naught a sound Essence of life leaches out, uninterrupted, crimson stain o'er chaste white land One last tear escapes from hollowed eye, and shatters, deafening upon the ground A familiar cry reached out across time, piercing the uneasy moment, An anguished call, a desperate plea for the life of an unborn child A soul torn, chilled to the core by such a painful, sorrow filled echo Elapsed memories again revived, harsh light reveals recollections vile Incapable of comprehending such despair yet again, he shuns the vision And as tears trace across weathered facade, plunges upon that deadly blade Laid down side by side, dying eyes locked as one, their spirits freed Lost souls rejoice, joined again in precious release, the price was paid The heavens opened, the earth did quieten, a blanket pallid in deathly silence As if by miracle of light, a searing warmth banished forth the frigid air Such a scene as now beheld, known to be unheard off across all the lands Left little doubt the Gods had played a hand, mere mortals left without a care "Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our feet when our wings have trouble remembering how to fly." ~unknown [This message has been edited by EagleOne (edited 07-12-2001).] |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
full of imagery, I've not read the 1st 3 of this, however, so I've come in in the middle of the movie |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh Eagle....what a perfect ending to a beautiful poem |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Hiya Eagle, I really enjoyed this so now I'm off 2 go and huntdown the other parts that came before this... Hugs2UpoetFriend *~coco~* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
EagleOne~ I commend you on a piece well-done ! 'Left little doubt the Gods had played a hand' Indeed ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Thank you my poet friends! This series has certainly been something different for me and it's nice to know you enjoyed. Take care! "Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Eagle One, I guess this means the saga is over..... I wonder if the movie will have more chapters? I loved the story you have shared with us. Beautiful ending. Take care, ME |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Oh my...this is fantastic. I now must go read the rest of these pieces. Excellent Work EagleOne! ~Sheri |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Vas ~ don't ya just hate it when that happens. Appreciate your comments, thanks. Paula ~ ah! But is it the end? Coco ~ A pleasure to have you stop in. The other parts are in # 14, I hope you enjoy, take care. Marge ~ Thank you my friend, I don't think I've ever had a commendation before! Take care! M E ~ A movie! hhmmm now there is something to think on…lol. Glad you have enjoyed. Irie ~ Your comment does humble me but I'm glad you enjoyed this, thanks! "Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Hi Eddie, to think I nearly missed this one! Lucky I did a search to see what you have been up to Great finale. Now I think I will have to put them all together so I can read the full story. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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