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Twenty or Less...#15 |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Soft-faced phantoms Feel-good dreamers Candyland lovers Forever reaches out From Star-crossed innocence Of sacred Child inside (Copyright 2001 by: MARK V SHELDON) "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Very Good Mark, It touches me as this: I am one of those feel good dreamers and I will be forever. I reach out from the innocent child. To find a life on the outside, growth and growing. Do not fear going forward slowly, |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
The child inside is sacred, is that little engine that keeps us running. Thanks. |
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Mishtheelf Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 68 |
This one I got a pretty easy interpretation of, it seemed straightforward. *L* Maybe it just struck me in the right place. It does raise a bit of a ponderance for me though. Is anyone ever really starcrossed? Does Fate decide the path of our lives? Or do we? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mark, Enjoyed the read. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
I hear you, Dan. That's more or less where my thoughts were... Absolutely, Walker. May he/she always remain the sacred child. Ted, things are as simple as we choose them to be... and conversely. The questions raised are the ones meant to be pondered. Thanks, Sy. "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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