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Fingerprinting
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Fingerprinting moments of lines dropped composed by revelation he touched them leaving fingerprints of mind's eye on her heart do you know the feeling of full words will not come breath cannot be drawn in skin sensitizes touch ripples do you know the feeling of full? processionals following one by one escorting visions of what’s to become of us, then bringing castles from the sky downward to lead pipe certainty of underground dreams wherever I am with you is right no beast, this, a good man who would only pick up pieces left behind to resculpt what once was, for he saw, he saw the beauty therein his fingerprints will caress scars repair hope bring forth the warm his fingerprints leaving behind impressions even the Masters could not touch awakening desires never before realized his fingerprints remain write with grace, all others lose face; |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done.. very nicely done... always a pleasure to read what is well written.... |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
"his fingerprints will caress scars repair hope bring forth the warm his fingerprints leaving behind impressions even the Masters could not touch awakening desires never before realized" I understand this very well, as I've seen it in occur. Such lovely words here. Such tenderness in this piece. Thank you for sharing this. Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Oh, you inspire me to keep attempting free verse. I wish I could write like this This is lovely Liz |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Oh, yes, this is lovely and captivating!!! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I feel that we all do this, at one time or another. . . it left me with a good "impression". . .  ----------------------------------------------------------- |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
do you know the feeling of full words will not come breath cannot be drawn in skin sensitizes touch ripples do you know the feeling of full? =============================== Oh my.... this is an enchanting write.... intense and sensual... and this is a IWIHWT!!! Feels like Im dancing with truth and wisdom |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LadyInWhite~ Oh, how I like this - 'bringing castles from the sky downward to lead pipe certainty of underground dreams' Very nicely done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh to be full! Nicely done, I loved this. If you have a choice to sit down or dance, dance! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
hi LIW.. this is absolutely beautiful and I thank you for this wonderful treat of a read4me2nite *~coco~* |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Lady In White- How did I miss this one? Glad I finally found it...this is wonderful! "do you know the feeling of full words will not come breath cannot be drawn in skin sensitizes touch ripples do you know the feeling of full?" I love it!  hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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