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Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2001-07-20 04:59 PM

Shadow Staining

It was one of those nights,
you know the kind I mean
when the Latin music is
moving your soul to the beat
and your lost in the whispers
of.. feel the rhythm

Heat to heart.. soul to shedding
soul.. we blend and meld
until there is only one shadow
on the sweat stained wall

Your finger tips leaving evidence of
passion, sweet and musky from
thighs to lips ... and my cries
are lost to your throat as you inhale
me once more, while the music
drives us

Deeper...lost to the
night we are victims of desire
my heart, your burning dagger of
lust, thrust...
and I swallow one more cry
come to me now
to the shadow on the wall

"Trace my body with your words
and in doing so, you touch my heart"
Snow

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-07-20 05:08 PM

Whew... it was hot here already what with the temp being around 96.. but the heat index just went up...

sensual indeed...

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

2 posted 2001-07-21 02:29 AM

Steamy and passionate. Love it

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

3 posted 2001-07-21 02:35 AM

::;smiles:::
only 96 for you? well then, I just wanted to even it up a bit .. lol

thank you both for your comments. and although there is the sensuality, there really is more to this piece than that.
but i always love to see what a reader
gets out of my writing. ;-)
thank you very much!!!

Snow

"Trace my body with your words
and in doing so, you touch my heart"
Snow

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

4 posted 2001-07-21 02:36 AM

Youch! Bring out the fire extingisher!

You have expressed your heated moment well

Wonderful write!
~Krista

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you.
And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
~Winnie

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

5 posted 2001-07-22 02:05 PM

Bump

**lost**
Junior Member

since 2001-07-16

Posts 32
ma

6 posted 2001-07-22 02:15 PM

wow...that is excellent, although im not too sure i can understand (if it does exist) a deeper meaning or if it is the narration of two peoples souls combinding in pleasure. forgive my ignorance

confused among strangers,
lost amongst myself.
**lost**

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

7 posted 2001-07-23 02:37 PM

oh my.....fanning myself feeling some heat here. Love it.

Charisma

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