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Sweetest Little Angel
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Sweetest Little Angel |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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Sweetest Little Angel i met a little angel as sweet as he could be he gently tugged my pant leg and smiled right up at me i spoke, but some to loudly and rapidly he fled i looked around and found him peeking out from 'neath the bed i slowly knelt beside him spoke softly so he'd hear 'come out, sweet little angel... you have no need to fear' he smiled, then blushing slightly he ventured into view stepped into my outstretched hand said, 'i'm happy to meet you' we talked awhile until we tired then blowing me a kiss he said, 'before i go to sleep i want to tell you this' 'i am a broken angel my wings no longer fly so please be gentle with me 'cuz i'm really very shy' 'if you'll take good care of me i will be yours to keep' then he crawled into my pocket curled up and fell asleep as he slumbers peacefully all wrapped up in a ball i know this little angel is the sweetest of them all ~vlraynes "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
*blushes just blusheS* thank you hun. *tear of joy* always the broken   jesse When I was a young man I vowed never to marry until I found the ideal woman. Well, I found her - but, alas, she was waiting for the perfect man. :( |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
 very sweet for our friend, tricks.. i knew you wouldnt be able to help your poetic self..  and to jes...i'll not be happy with you signing.."forever the broken"..  i believe you will fly angel..you can fly.. hugs, g "If you should die before me, ask if you could bring a friend." |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
oh this is so tender and sweet, I could see every little moment and enjoyed each immensely |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
sorry hun *hugs* wasnt trying to say always. just that broken angel is my nic name. and no matter what it will always be a part of me even when i get better it dont mean i am sad jesse When I was a young man I vowed never to marry until I found the ideal woman. Well, I found her - but, alas, she was waiting for the perfect man. :( |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww ! This is so gosh-darned sweet ! Just like YOU ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
....ok ok..i'll take that JES.. a part of your PAST though... hugs, g ps.. to the top with tricks!  so many things i want to say to him..but i just placed a rose on his grave, and talked to the wind... |
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WhiteDragon Member
since 2001-07-07
Posts 70O-town, Fl |
Hehe, very sweet poem. I could see the whole thing happening as I read. GOd Bless, Jeremy |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
It's very special to have an angel in your pocket. What a sweet story! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
jesse- Ahhh...there ya go blushing again, little one.. You're just too sweet. Thanks for the inspiration, my little angel friend... dg- Yep...just couldn't help myself..lol. Some people and just inspirational i guess. Glad you like this..  VAS- thanks so much, my friend... glad you were able to visualize this little picture...it really was fun to watch.. jesse- Glad to hear it doesn't mean you're sad, but ya know what? I have no doubt in my mind that someday, someone is gonna mend that sweet little heart of yours and you won't be broken anymore... hugs to you.. Marge- Back at ya, my sweet friend.. Jesse is such a sweet person, I just couldn't help but pen this little ditty.. Glad you enjoyed it.. love and hugs..  dg...or fallen rain...or whoever you are today...lol Thanks for the bump.. Don't you worry...we're gonna mend that little angel's wings yet.. Jeremy- Thanks so much...so happy you enjoyed.. Martie- Yes...special indeed.. Glad you enjoyed this little story.. hugs all, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Vicky, This is very well done! hats of to ya lady! You are so awsome! I cant say enough! love ya Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Wait until I read Tori this one, she is going to laugh herself silly. Oh Vicky this was so cute, and can't you just see him, I have his clothes all picked out! Now that is poetry, when you get out my crayons! ~If you have a choice to sit down or dance, I hope that you dance~ |
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Rae of Sunshine Junior Member
since 2001-07-15
Posts 35Valley of the Sun, Arizona |
Vic! I luv it, luv it, luv it! So sweet and gentle...just like you! Miss you lots my friend, and reading your writing always brightens my day! Can't wait to read your next inspiration! luv Tanya Dance like nobody is watching |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
what a wonderful gesture for a friend...i'm sure the angel will heal soon enough with such emotional support from you |
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Constance Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 393Ohio |
An adorable broken angel in your pocket? I'm so jealous! This poem is was just the smile I needed today, thanks. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Cindi- Thanks much, my dear...glad you like it. Mysteria- I'm so happy to know that you will be sharing this one with Tori. Thanks much, sweet friend. Tanya- Thank you, sweets.. Really glad you like it.. Still looking forward to YOUR next inspiration as well.. faterider- I believe he will...thank you.. Constance- So happy this gave you a smile.. Really glad you enjoyed. hugs to all, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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