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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2001-07-20 08:16 AM


“BY CANDLELIGHT”
by
Bill Charles
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Blue eyes dance in the candlelight,
as she sips wine, the lady wishes
to be wild, and captivate,
in a seduction like no other,
and I feel the warmth of you…

Beyond every edge she’s ever touched,
a deep promise echoes in her eyes,
as hers gaze into mine,
of what could be, and
if chosen by both in this moment,
while sipping wine, in the candlelight…

Blue eyes of romance dances with sapphires
into the night, exchanging not only wine,
but affectionate, tender glances…
Tightly you are, wild, captivating into my arms,
seduced, no others ever breathing close,
with whispers of promises…

Blue gazes into sapphire,
with thoughts of what might be,
chosen by two, when dancing to rhythm,
closer, and a sensuous sip of wine,
with you, by candlelight…
~~~~



© Copyright 2001 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-07-20 08:50 AM


very well done.. romantic, sensual and enjoyable to read..


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2 posted 2001-07-20 09:10 AM


My kinda dance   Well done.
Ariana
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3 posted 2001-07-20 12:20 PM


BC

I see you are back!  Ah yes, there is nothing as capitvating as having someone you care for sipping wine with you in the candlelight!  Very romantic and seductive!

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4 posted 2001-07-20 12:52 PM


I love that last stanza BC. . . it's just perfect. . . "blue eyes gaze into sapphire". . . a great image of just how subtle shades of love are. . .

great job. . .  

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Honeybee
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5 posted 2001-08-01 10:03 PM


Bill~

I love this, eyes are always a perfect image to use. You write romance well  

Melissa~

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6 posted 2001-08-01 11:25 PM


Blue eyes, candle light, and a romantic man, you know just what it takes to win a woman.
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7 posted 2001-08-03 09:55 AM


Dining & Dancing by candlelight... What a way to go... I like it, BCI...
illusion
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8 posted 2001-08-03 10:51 AM


I like the soft romance of this one.   You're both very lucky.  
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9 posted 2002-03-14 10:47 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautifully sensual and romantic, sweet friend, there's nothing more beautfiully enchanting than having dinner in the moonlight with the one you love with dancing afterward! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is sooooooo beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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