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Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-07-19 11:19 PM

We stand here together, yet alone
Just like two actors on the stage
I'm feeling so very frightened
As I bear the wrath of your verbalised rage

The parts that we play are not fiction
These scenes that we make are all true
The love that once lived here has died
I don't have the same feelings for you

This season has now run it's course
Time for this "play" to come to an end
Our lives are to take brand new paths
Time for my broken heart to mend

As we face the final curtain
And exit through the stage door
My mind begins to wonder
Will love adorn my aching heart once more?

Suetang

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

1 posted 2001-07-20 12:55 PM

There are many parts we play in life...the one you write of here is an unfortunate act. I wish you the best of luck with future ones! Great poem

Hugs,
~Krista

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you.
And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
~Winnie the Pooh

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

2 posted 2001-07-20 01:09 AM

Will love adorn my aching heart once more?

Very gentle smile,,yes it will, and cover the scar tissue until brand new...I believe that, so please you do too.

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

3 posted 2001-07-20 01:15 AM

Even love faces a final act...you captured this well. Thanks.

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

4 posted 2001-07-20 03:22 AM

Sometimes life isn't fair. Yet, sometimes long after its happened, you realize it was for the best. Just a personal experience. Take care.

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

2dalimit
Member Elite

since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

5 posted 2001-07-20 07:25 AM

Excellent write.

Melton

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

6 posted 2001-07-20 08:53 AM

Next Act ... new scene... new script...

Very nicely done...

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

7 posted 2001-07-20 09:06 AM

The short answer? YES

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