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WhiteKnight
Member

since 2001-01-01

Posts 83
NY

0 posted 2001-07-19 11:14 PM

I dedicate this poem to Antonella, may God grant her 48 hours in a day so that she can spend some with me...
New Beginnings
by White Knight

crimson hues,
wash away the blues,
as the sweltering sun slides,
slowly,
gracefully into the sea,

Light pink at first,
then deeper red,
the sky signals the end,
the end of the day,

shimmering light,
reflecting,
almost night.
the sea swallows the sun,

the twinkling stars shine above,
the day is done,
but all is not over,
all is not gone,
just changed somehow.

a new beauty fills the night,
not the same,
yet somehow right,
as I sit and count the stars this night.

The moon comes out,
and says to me,
I am not alone,
I am free.

I think briefly of the past,
but it is gone,
at last.

Tonight is here like the stars,
and tomorrow,
is not so far.

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

1 posted 2001-07-19 11:21 PM

A stunning picture you weaved with your words, I loved it. Take care....Sue

Suetang

Voiceless
Senior Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind

2 posted 2001-07-20 12:28 PM

This is really neat.
A truly enjoyable read.
Thanks for posting it!

~*Freedom Is Not Free*~ (Korean War Memorial)

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

3 posted 2001-07-20 12:34 PM

Ahh, what a beautiful sunset you paint!

Great imagery here, I love it.
~Krista

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you.
And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
~Winnie the Pooh

Janette

Member Elite

since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

4 posted 2001-07-20 01:42 AM

Great sentiments...nice flow, too

I am new here and not an expert by any means, but perhaps this poem would be just as fine...without any punctuation...just a thought.

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

5 posted 2001-07-20 02:45 AM

So cool! I love this poem!

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

WhiteKnight
Member

since 2001-01-01

Posts 83
NY

6 posted 2001-07-20 07:50 AM

Thank you everyone I am very happy that I can share with all of you. :-)

Agent696_DS
Junior Member

since 2001-01-31

Posts 33
NY, USA

7 posted 2001-07-20 08:37 AM

Nice work I enjoyed reading this very much.

Your friend agent

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2001-07-20 11:14 AM

loved it

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

9 posted 2001-07-20 02:52 PM

I enjoyed.. very nicely painted images and all tied to the message quite well..

good one here!

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