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Help, Help !!!
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Help, Help !!! |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Help, Help !!! help, help my life is on stand still this can’t be happening a nightmare in real my best friend got out by mistake you’re so special to me this emptiness I can’t take placed your picture and number everywhere now I sit here waiting for you by the phone I miss you so terribly much oh please, please come home where is you can be? my heart is long past sad in this empty hole you left here to my life you so much add you know all the secrets of my heart it is not time for you to go my tears fall free, not time for us to part know all my happiness and my pain loves me no matter who I am to you I am always the same you truly are my best friend happy to be with me through the good and bad yes, I know you’re a dog but still the best friend I ever had I am doing laundry to rest my mind I run…..i hear the phone ring no, sorry I don’t feel like talking just waiting for a call that happiness again will bring RING RING … fear in my heart the voice says, “did you lose your best friend?” the words for days I have longed to hear at last……..the nightmare is at an end WELCOME HOME HARPER !!!!  "...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (edited 07-20-2001).] |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
WOW WOW WOW Lucky you to have Harper and lucky Harper to have you. I know the feeling so much. Lovely poem Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh geez, how wonderful you found the one that will always love regardless. I have had that happen too much, found one after a week of searching one time...very good..very gentle big smile |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Further proof that absence indeed makes the heart grow fonder. Glad for your happy ending. "Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve" |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
It was so sad until I got to the end. I am glad you got your friend back.  Cool write here.Sauni Sauni :) |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Yes it is great to have harper back home. Plus now everyone can see who harper is. A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Awww...I'm glad Harper's home! Sure know how you felt. Nice write. |
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1slippery_lady Junior Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 20Ohio, USA |
Slickster, that poem is soooo touching, it litterally gave me GOOSEbimples. I know JUST HOW YOU FELT Sis, and I sure am happy for you, that he came back home, allll safe and sound. ****HUGS**** |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Very nice...I could feel the urgency building as I swiftly read along....great movement. |
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