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Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

0 posted 2001-07-19 12:54 PM

Kissed Memory
Melissa P. Monette

Lost in reminisce
when romance and lust froze time
heart goosebumps flutter
moist seduction rekindled
in bittersweet memory

Breath lingers on lips
yesterday kisses desire
within bond's caress
love's intoxicating taste
tatooed forever on soul

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

1 posted 2001-07-19 01:00 PM

'scuse me, I need a fan...

'swarm in here, don't ya know

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2001-07-19 01:01 PM

Melissa~
You know what ?????
I just love this ! !
You do romance so romantically~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

*Now pay me my Monopoly million !

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

3 posted 2001-07-19 01:22 PM

beautifully done Melissa..loved it

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2001-07-19 02:21 PM

Mellisa,
Well done enjoyed the read.

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

5 posted 2001-07-19 02:39 PM

Love these wonderful tanka's Melissa...excellent!!

Charisma

Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

6 posted 2001-07-22 03:54 PM

Richly romantic. Beautifully done.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2001-07-24 07:19 PM

wonderful my friend. . . you do Romance very well. . .

excellent. . .

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Mike
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since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

8 posted 2001-07-24 10:37 PM

well written, and I concur, romantic poetry suits you well...

Dulcinea
Senior Member

since 2001-07-22

Posts 774
IN

9 posted 2001-07-24 10:39 PM

Very romantic! The images lend to the poetry so very well...wonderful work! *S*

Janette

Member Elite

since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

10 posted 2001-07-28 11:03 AM

"tatooed forever on soul"

Wow...what an ending...I love it!

After seeing your lovely poem in the "adult forum," I felt inspired to go and seek out more of the poems you have submitted. And I have...you are a delightful poet!

2dalimit
Member Elite

since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

11 posted 2001-07-29 07:36 AM

Excellent!!! and romantic. ...within bond's caress
Hold on tight.

Melton

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