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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
What's up Passions...I'm back again....I missed y'll though....anyways, this an old piece that was inspired by a poem Michael Jackson did on one of his album covers...I believe I took a couple of his lines to...I hope he doesn't sue me(ha, ha) and I don't have the album..funny, I don't remember which Michael Jackson album(it may be Dangerous though)...anyways, ignore my stupidity and enjoy my poem!! Oh, mother earth, of brown-colored dirt, so round and blue, full of undiscovered worth, words can't express, how much I love you. Your stars are shining cuties, your galaxy, possess infinite beauty. Oh mother earth, full of genuine worth, you've provided us with sparkling, clear blue waters as the golden sun, is your most suitable father, and the moon, is your beautiful daughter. Lucky us, as we're exposed to this life cause, everything in sight, is like, gold to my eyes. Oh mother earth, I can't deny, my burning love for you inside. Oh, mother earth, protect us from harm continue to wrap us, in your big round arms, continue to make us smile, from your profound charm and stay in unison with the sun because, we need him to keep us warm.(ha, ha) Oh mother earth, I'm so proud to be in your life, that I can't think of a better place to be because, you're the ultimate paradise as well as, the love of my life. [This message has been edited by Nate Dogg (edited 07-11-2001).] |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
heh heh heh like this section best!!! continue to wrap us, in your big round arms, especially the 'round' part |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
hard not to love her... but always nice when someone reminds you they do to... Nice words Nate |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
love it Nate. . . really well done. . . you do have that gift for just making it flow like silk. . .  ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Your personification of Earth is fantastic, who couldn't adore her? |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
I wanna thank all those who read my poem...peace and one love!!! Nathan |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Loved these lines... "You've provided us with sparkling clear blue waters as the golden sun is your most suitable father and the moon is your beautiful daughter."....James |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Nate loved this and you paint a great picture! Thank you, Mother_Earth |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Thank you James and Mother Earth, for your nice comments!! Nathan |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
Very nice! I haven't seen ya around for awhile, you got me worried for a second! Nice to see you back, and a great poem to return with! ~Jen~ A.K.A Voiceless ~*Freedom Is Not Free*~ (Korean War Memorial) |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I have ALWAYS enjoyed your poetry and this is no exception...exceptional yes... |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Thanks Paula and Voiceless....hey Voiceless, I've been worried about you too....I have seen nothing much from you lately either.....hope to see more poetry from you in the future.....peace! Nathan [This message has been edited by Nate Dogg (edited 07-19-2001).] |
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DYME Member
since 2000-07-29
Posts 104Texas |
That was deep man...for real though, I liked it. It showes how beautiful the earth can really be if you just look. I'm not crazy...I have papers to prove it!! |
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