Open Poetry #15 |
Dragons in the Moonlight |
Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
She saw him sitting beneath the kumquat tree on the bamboo terrace eating his sushi She sat near the pagoda shy as can be watching him as she sipped her ginseng tea dragons breathing fire into the moonlight shined into her eyes, almond eyes bright erhu music serenades the night Chinese lanterns hang in candlelight bamboo flutes whisper a melody lotus flowers blooming on wings of love he sat quietly reading his fortune cookie "Your future holds a woman with almond eyes and pure as the white lotus in her hair beneath a pagoda in the lotus night air." Chantilly Whispers http://www.angelfire.com/poetry/syberrosetx/ Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. Pablo Picasso [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 07-18-2001).] |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Victoria, I love this, you have such a descriptive and imaginative ways with words. This is a keeper Melissa~ |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
very romantic makes me think of "Sayonara" |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Lovely, a nice dragon I presume? Sandra |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
And what number on the fortune's reverse side? I see a more content photo n'est pas? "Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve" |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
My personal favorite Victoria...the beauty of this entices me...James |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Nice work. Like the unusual images and I enjoyed a great deal |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Melissa..i am glad you enjoyed Virginia..nice to hear from you as always Sandra..well i hope so ha..thanks Sandra. James..thank you..now I had a feeling you would enjoy this one. Richard..I always forget to look at the reverse side ha..hopefully it was #8..i believe that is a lucky number in the Orient..thank you for peeking in.. Pat..I appreciate your nice comments ~Victoria~ Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautifully breathtaking, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always shine with such gorgeous imagery! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is captivating! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you noah dear..appreciate your sweet comments hugsss ~Victoria |
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