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Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-07-18 08:56 PM

weary mind and hands
follow figure to thy bower
mesmerizing dreams

~*~

soon the dawn shall stream
thy write would encapsule dreams
fresh of mind and hands

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

1 posted 2001-07-18 09:07 PM

Sunshine-
   These are beautiful.
   Much enjoyed...and they're inspiring too *wink*

   hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

2 posted 2001-07-18 10:41 PM

Very beautiful and soothing. I enjoyed them Sunshine.

~ You do this dance only once ~

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

3 posted 2001-07-18 10:45 PM

Karilea, you penned two very serene senryus, both are lovely~

Take care,
Melissa~

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

4 posted 2001-07-18 11:07 PM

these are so soft they are forging a yawn from the depths of me

Flutterwings
Member

since 2001-07-10

Posts 288
Maine

5 posted 2001-07-18 11:33 PM

Your quill has a touch that speaks with a soft voice .. Bravo!

((~.~))

Voiceless
Senior Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind

6 posted 2001-07-19 12:32 PM

I have found the inspiration!
Yippee Skippy!
And I can see why it inspired!
Beautiful!

~*Freedom Is Not Free*~ (Korean War Memorial)

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

7 posted 2001-07-19 12:38 PM

Sleep sweet dreamless sleep
Til the morning sun wakes thee
Then dream through the day

Beautiful Karilea

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

8 posted 2001-07-19 12:57 PM

Soft and Somnalant. Lovely Senryu.

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

9 posted 2001-07-19 08:01 AM

so beautifully done Karilea, love these pieces.

((hugs))
Charisma

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

10 posted 2001-07-19 09:10 AM

very nicely done Sunshine...

I hope the sleep was peaceful...

I enjoyed

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

11 posted 2001-07-19 09:18 AM

I have to say I'm envious..I simply can't do this - being the babble mouth that I am...

K

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

12 posted 2001-07-19 09:24 AM

beautiful feel to these

"Four be the things I'd been better without: Love, curiosity, freckles and doubt."
-- Dorothy Parker, on herself

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

13 posted 2001-07-19 12:41 PM

GREAT

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. [URL=http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/]http://communities.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

14 posted 2001-07-19 01:20 PM

Karilea~
Tiny thoughts ... well-crafted~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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