Open Poetry #15 |
Baby Shiloh's Dream |
Flutterwings Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 288Maine |
A photo of Baby Shiloh Baby Shiloh's DreamYou lie here, hooked to monitors and tubes. Buttery ringlets frame your angelic face. Robbed of breath at the age of one; you dawdle in limbo; I pray for your return. Mute, placid, adrift on angel wings you travel. What do you see in this dream that keeps you from awakening? Are you warm and aglow, or in a silent shadow where I can not enter and you can not escape. Can you feel Grandma's love when I kiss your soft warm cheek? Do you feel my heart pounding against your limp body when I hold you in an embrace? Is the tear I see in the corner of your eye a physical response, or a sign of hope? I'm knocking on your slumber and pleading for you to Please! Wake up! How I wish I knew, if you are trapped in turbulence or enveloped by angelic hymns. ~~~~~~~****~~~~~~~ Shiloh is my grandson and he almost drowned 3 years ago... He is still in a coma. [This message has been edited by Flutterwings (edited 07-18-2001).] |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
This is a heart wrencher...you have our prayers... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
My heart goes out to you... |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Flutterwings- You and Shiloh will be in my thoughts and prayers. With God, ALL things are possible. Much love to you. hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Flutterwings Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 288Maine |
Thank you so much for your kind words and compassion. Yes, for those who pray thanks for the prayers.... My dear grandson would need a complete healing miracle. We have *not* given up hope. ((~.~)) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I've been to your website and read all about Shiloh. . . my heart goes out to you. . . we've made miracles happen before. . . there's always a second time. . . ---------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
John 16:23 ... I say to you, whatever you ask the Father in My name He will give you. My prayers are with you all. [This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 07-18-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
FlutterWings~ This is just a lovely piece of your heart. I, too, have visited your lovely web site. Shiloh is precious~ My prayers accompany those of others who would lift him to our Lord. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
My prayers too are with you. I feel selfish in saying that I'm glad I'm not nor have been in this position but have had those dark daydreams before. I would be tempted to read to the child and I'll wager you do. God bless. "Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve" |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Oh Flutterwings~ This is so bittersweetly beautiful. You and your grandson are in my prayers. This was a tearjerker, I am truly sorry for what has happened, but, I have hope that God will answer our prayers~ Melissa~ |
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Flutterwings Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 288Maine |
Shiloh, the little wants to thank each and everyone of you for the prayers and sending positive energy his way. This picture was before the accident... The other picture on top of the poem was from Geocities and it did not come out. ((~.~)) |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Maggie, Well you know how I feel and my arms and heart have been and always will be open for you. You know I love you all and you are always in my prayers, always. Hope you don't mind I copied to my site and moved one here for you: This is Shiloh After his accident God Bless This Wee Soul For He Is Our LessonIf you are wondering where the picture went (Geocities won't let you take their bandwidth and link to that site. You are welcome to use my homepage to store pictures. ~ You do this dance only once ~ [This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 07-19-2001).] |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
to be cradled in the Father's hands so closely is surely Shiloh's gift to be cradled in the hearts of all who know of him and his life, a miracle for certain where there is life, there is hope the life God chooses, ultimately for Shiloh, will be pure perfection for him in fact, just think what Shiloh's life is doing for many right now...uniting them to proclaim the Father's will, amen... |
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Blaec Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 130The Sunshine State |
Your beautiful poem brought me to tears. My prayers will be with you and your grandson also. Miracles happen everyday. Kris |
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Flutterwings Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 288Maine |
Thanks Mysteria...... You are an and you know I too! If not for you I would not have learned how to put photos on this site... You are such a giving soul. Here is my gift to you No peeking~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh Flutterwings, you know you are welcome - what would the world be without your gentle, sweet pictures, hugs, and loving words. Thank you for the flowers they were lovely. Oh...and in the bouquet was a 'flutterby'! Ah hah...Tripod won't let you use their graphics either (remember that Maggie), just tried one and it vanished! Oh well, it was cute, a little girl holding flowers, lol! ~ You do this dance only once ~ [This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 07-19-2001).] |
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