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Stained Glass Pains |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
broken pieces glass scattered in sunlight of thought reflect images distorted by perspective collected assembled into word windows allowing others to see through your pains |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
And only slightly distorted is the view  |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Ron -- this one's AWESOME! VERY powerful, descriptive, relateable, and clever. I'm starting to love minimalism, in great part, thanks to your inspirations! (And I really like the play on the word "pains"!) -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." --Del Casher [This message has been edited by MARK V SHELDON (edited 07-18-2001).] |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
One can even see through the greens, blues, yellows and reds of this stained pane... Well done, Sir! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Interloper.. distorted as are all views in some form.. Thanks for the comment pard... any cooler in TX today? Mark.. now you are just making me blush.. I am glad you have enjoyed this and my other efforts at writing... Thank You Lady.. yes all things are colored and the hues are different depending on whether you are looking in..or out |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Wisely done. I like this very much. Do not fear going forward slowly, |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Thanks Shadow... I do appreciate the comment!! |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
The stain of pain falls mainly on the panes. Cool write, a figure 8 of a poem! Corinne |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
cool clever write...and yet the pieces of brokeness can be fitted together into a masterpiece of extreme beauty...isn't that an amazing thing! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow - phenomenally expressed! Very clever write! Melissa~ |
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Mishtheelf Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 68 |
*laughs* I think I was looking at my backside at some point during that reading. I enjoyed it. |
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