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Open Poetry #15

into Sorrow

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2001-07-18 06:41 AM

into Sorrow

Kiss her like
there is no tomorrow

for her lips
may be gone tomorrow

as lack of kiss
fades into sorrow.

Jameslee@July18,2001

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2001-07-18 06:52 AM

You have said so much in so few lines James ... we must live the moment, indeed. Very nicely captured.

Best wishes,
/Kit

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2001-07-18 08:36 AM

yes... you have said a great deal with just a few words... nicely done

Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

3 posted 2001-07-18 06:40 PM

So true..... We must never take for granted the ones that we love.

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