Open Poetry #15 |
Your Voice |
JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Your Voice If I asked very nicely promised to sit and listen quietly would you talk to me? You could tell me stories about your life or put to word thoughts that float through your mind maybe just read to me. Goodnight kiss, my lullaby halcyon dreams where sleep abides your words were to me. It seems to be your voice I miss tonight. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
OH...I love this. I was just thinking today, how at first I was happy just to get a note from him, then I was delighted to hear his voice--and now that I have looked into his eyes? Nothing else will do... well, maybe SOMETHING else would do. Thank you for this. Was like a testimony...grins... |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
I loved this. It makes me think of someone I would love to have as a lover. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done... I enjoyed |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Good listening is such an aphrodisiac.... well done, JLR...keep them coming.... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
ooooh, I like this so very much...what a tender, loving request. Well woven, great flow but the message is best of all! |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
I loved this totally made me think of someone who's voice I would love to hear right now. Amazing |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well done indeed. The sound of a loved one's voice is precious indeed. |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
I enjoyed this much. Do not fear going forward slowly, |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
You remind me of a dear friend, now gone, whose voice I listened to very intently, knowing it would be stilled too soon . . . I miss it. \\ |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
I understand this well, that sweet voice that we all need to be there with us. Great expression of love. |
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