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Leap of Faith
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Leap of Faith |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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A point in life is reached when deep within your heart you know... That every road you’ve traveled led to this... That nothing you have done was overlooked, or done by chance... And never were your actions hit or miss... Especially in the matters where your heart begins to love... the seeds are deeply sown within your soul... And just a word that’s written, or a song that’s meant for two... Will prove that you no longer have control... This point is reached outside the bounds of time, and makes it’s move... With lightning speed it shows which path to take... No longer are you able to retreat, and leave behind... And neither can you love for love’s own sake... You’re faced with new reality, that stops you in your tracks... It’s “Now or Never” sinks into your bones... You can’t escape, because the heart, that beats within your breast, is telling you that now you aren’t alone... Acceptance marks the start of that, which takes your breath away... The need is felt to join two lives as one... No matter what the obstacles, that need provides a path... For two to walk, into the rising sun... The first step is the hardest one, it starts as simple choice... Your soul has picked the one to be it’s mate... No turning back, your heart has flown, across Love’s great divide... Your time has come... So, close those eyes, and take that Leap of Faith! The road goes on forever, and the stories never end... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Eyes closed, getting ready to leap..hey give me a little shove, ok?  I like this, and understand it, and hope it has the best fairy tale ending of all. Sandra |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
but...but....the water's so COLD.... {smiles} good read, Sunnyone! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunnyone, In a way it's a path I'm still to tread. Enjoyed. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi lil' sis... Yes, it will...and we all will!! Thank you!! (Glad you liked the theme here!) Hi big sis... it only looks cold...go ahead, close your eyes and jump right in!! Thank you too!! Hi Seymore... yes, sometimes it takes more than one leap, but you have to keep on, trying for the magic one!! Thank you!! The road goes on forever, and the stories never end... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
a leap of faith is needed in many facets of life, for certain, wonderfully woven poem re. found love |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Sunny "So, close those eyes, and take that Leap of Faith!" I have some extra parachutes - need one??? Hang on tight, love with all of your heart, and don't forget to pull the chord to happiness. A |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
take the leap of faith believe with all of your heart pray with all your might |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SunnyOne~ This is a fantastic piece~ 'This point is reached outside the bounds of time, and makes it’s move...' Oh, yes .... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Vas... None of us ever really have any answers, and that leap is never a sure thing....that's where faith comes in. Thank you!!! Ariana... I'm wrapped in a blanket of love that has it's own wings...all the parachute I will ever need....but thank you!!!!! Interloper... oh yes.........thank you, my good friend!! Marge... I knew that you would like this one, as you, my dear friend, have an unending supply of faith and the courage to show the rest of us how to leap!!! Thank you!!! The road goes on forever, and the stories never end... |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Hi Sunny, I've made a few leaps like this and have been fortunate in that they've always come out as I'd intended. Good write and much enjoyed. Leap on, my friend. Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Encouraging words, Sunnyone... An old saying relates "approach Love with reckless abandon"... there comes a time when the mind can no longer control and the heart must take over, but the catch is to never have any regrets and enjoy it all for what it is and will always remain. -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Michael... thank you, my friend, and with eyes closed...I leap!!!! MVS... yes...I do so agree. That is truly the secret of love in any form. Take it as it is and enjoy it. Thank you.... The road goes on forever, and the stories never end... |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Nicely done sunny..no critiques here ha..  ~Victoria~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh you....how did you know I was getting ready to jump? And was so afraid to do so? Thank you my twin...again and again you write me... |
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