Open Poetry #15 |
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Nothing Now Suffice |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738![]() |
If there were but one drop of dew in rainbow field of sparkling hue, on hands and knees, beyond Pride's yield-- Know you, now--I would find you. I do not care for wishes, grant... However, sweet, is sweet romance... Bodies--all, they pass away. Forever--I have felt this way. You remain connecting piece to puzzle of eternity. My heart is but a sacrifice; and if I could, I'd offer twice-- "Receive this blade," the virgin prayed, "for nothing else, will now suffice..." *repost from Open #7* |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Well, I sure don't remember this one but I'm glad you reposted it, I think this is one of your best! "It's easier to kill love than to nurture it" Fred Hardesty |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
My heart is but a sacrifice; and if I could, I'd offer twice-- "Receive this blade," the virgin prayed, "for nothing else, will now suffice..." Dark and enchanting. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Well Miss. K,...I see now that I've missed lots around here lately. No feasible way for me to catch up but mam', could we please get these marvelous bits of you bound for me? I've read this now, three times fast, another one real slow,...you lady, have got yourself one poetic mind. I am continuously shaking my head while reading you, saying to myself, 'how _does_ she do this, speak in such a fashion'. Always pulled in by you. *Peace poet. ~A. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow - well expressed with that flair all your own~ Melissa~ |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Wow ... no greater love ... Well done ![]() |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
this style suits you very well, serene one... |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ Simply en-canting~ ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, what can I say, but Wonderful..gentle smile |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
This so beautifully written, absolutely exquisite, I loved every word. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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