Open Poetry #15 |
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L's |
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Lady In White![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
L’s a promise that is all one might be ~ a promise ~ to him or her self a promise of life light love living a promise of L’s this, I give to you |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Nice promise indeed... and very nicely presented. Someone is lucky to receive such promises... I enjoyed! |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Tha would be an "L" of a gift ![]() |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Lady in White... Lovely Luscious Lively Lip-smacking letters of life and Interloper, you're incorrigible, but I LOL |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Nicely done. ~And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance, I hope you dance ~ |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Very cool...what and how you wrote this! |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LadyInWhite~ Light, lifting, lovely L's~ The thought is stunningly presented. Can't resist - but then again, what the L do I know ? ![]() Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Lady In White![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Cpat...good promises are hard to come by...but easy to keep...thank you! Interloper - a little tongue in cheek looks good on you... Virginia, we stand in agreement...thank you... Thank you Mysteria... JLR...thank you... Marge, sometimes presentation helps, and sometimes, the words stand alone! Thank you! |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Virginia, I am NOT incorrigible! I have been told many times just how corrigible I am. What they DO say is that I cannot be reformed. (Psssssst, what does that word mean, anyhow?) Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
love this.....minimal but powerful..great writing ![]() |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Lady In White- I Love this Little List of Lovely L's. ![]() Wonderful promises. Very nicely done.. ![]() hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
If he doesn't accept this gift, then get the L out of there! ![]() |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
Short, sweet and to the point...you don't mince your L's lovely lady! ![]() |
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