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Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2001-09-26 07:55 PM



Dead and gone I didn't,
realize until lata.
But don't worry pap,
cuz I won't forget ya.
Your deathday comes and goes,
but your memory is always there.
Watching over us,
and making us care.
We'll be together,
once again someday.
But until then,
this is all I can say.
Blessing me with grace,
and maybe even love.
Cuz I know your watching,
from heaven up above....

2day woulda been his 74th b-day
R.I.P. pap, luv ya much,


Did u ever have the feeling that he meant everything 2 u, yet u meant nothing 2 him?.....

[This message has been edited by Spine Grinder (edited 09-27-2001).]

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Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182
Netherlands
1 posted 2001-09-26 08:08 PM


It doesn't matter if you forget his deathday as long as he will be in your mind.

Nice poem, Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

2 posted 2001-09-28 07:36 AM


Stac, he is not gone, as long as we hold him in our hearts.  And he is watching, and saying that's my girl Stac.......that's my girl.  Love you much kiddo.  Thanks for remembering Him in your own special way.  He is smilin.....HUGS

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Spine Grinder
Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...
3 posted 2001-09-28 05:11 PM


thanks 4 the replies, aunt donna , i know he aint TRULY gone but i guess i felt i shoulda wrote one 4 him, i guess this one suited it!


Did u ever have the feeling that he meant everything 2 u, yet u meant nothing 2 him?.....

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