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Remembering tragedy
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Remembering tragedy |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia 
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Early morn great birds rain fire capitalist landmarks fall down down heaven black with ash under miles steel and concrete dead reminisce last thoughts as walking pictures grasp waning hope Wiping tears world looks on shock terror anger rage hate consume slipping eternal hell |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Brad---I enjoyed the visual of your twin towers of words--the economy of your words was effective and moving. Great job here! |
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Pell Member
since 2001-09-16
Posts 134Pacific NW |
What a neat presentation! Terrific imagery  When words cannot bear the burden of thought, it is the poet who lends them strength, hoisting the thoughts within reach of us all. [This message has been edited by Pell (edited 09-18-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Brad~ Quite effectively portrayed. 'last thoughts as walking pictures grasp waning hope Wiping tears' And the tears keep falling~ As the wait goes on ...... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh Brad! This is awesome!!! |
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