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The Tear
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The Tear |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Tear I marvel on a tears display A muse that fills my head Of all the passions brought to play The recipe of wed. How much of each or more of one Compose the salty clear. And why the mix when all was done Collected in a tear. Emotions clearly is the flame That simmers it in plight The choir sings of joy or blame To bring about its bite Shapes into elliptic splendor When pregnant full and ripe In spite of the source or gender And gone in just one swipe. Enough have fallen human dwell To put out all the flames of hell |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
perfect!!! |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
A nice write, felt the building up of one myself, well thought of and written. Rick |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cpat Hair, Thanks Rick, It's OK you can put out some flames. Thanks for the read. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ A write worthy of being published my dearest friend I trust you will take this idea into consideration poet Beautiful teary thoughts~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Enough sad emotion to fill a new ocean. Enjoyed. "Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve" |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Seymour- Wow...I must echo my friend, Marge... this is absolutely beautiful, and is most definately worthy of publishing.  What a lovely teardrop you've shed. hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 07-17-2001).] |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Ah yes, Sy...my throat started to clench just at the thought of the many shed by humanity, for reasons that go beyond our count... well done Sir...well done, indeed.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Very creative, huggs and kisses. RSWells, Nice comment, thank you. Vlraynes, You just made my day. Lady, Thank you for the well done. *L* |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And why the mix when all was done Collected in a tear. Emotions clearly is the flame That simmers it in plight The choir sings of joy or blame To bring about its bite Shapes into elliptic splendor When pregnant full and ripe In spite of the source or gender And gone in just one swipe. Enough have fallen human dwell To put out all the flames of hell ===================================== OHHOWILOVEWHENYOUWRITELIKETHIS!!! this is such a cool intend here Sy... a soulfull, deep, spiritual write.. and yet another example of why I love the way your poetic mind works. What was that you said about quality over quanity ... trust me sweet Stinky... you have NOTHING to worry about of that concern (you never have)  *winkiewinkie*  me  When your own emptiness is all thats getting through |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, I'll meet you on the mountain top Where tears are frozen on the spot. And we will skee to valleys free And only stop for raspberry tea. For you have magic in your word The sweetest that I've ever heard. Winkiewinkie Stinky |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
~Butterflies Dont Cry~ They say that butterflies dont cry but that tis only a pretty poetic lie I've seen the glisten fall from their emerald eyes I've heard the sadness in their sorrow's sighs It takes an angel's touch to calm their fears an angel's voice to make their pain disappear an angel's promise to last beyond forever's years an angel's love to baptize them in Heaven's Tears Forgiveness reflected in love's understanding eyes grant thee luna wings upon which to fly fly free ... fly high ... kiss the moon ... touch the sky Tis there, where the angels sigh ... and butterflies never again cry. JM   *winkiewinkie* love ya me [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 07-18-2001).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Amen, Sy, Amen. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, You are beyond description. Your pictures are beautiful your words are beautiful you are beautiful. Love Ya Sy Interloper, I agree Amen. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This is a beautiful post all the way round A poem worthy of being published with the obvious support of poet friends. Well done, Master Poet Liz |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Ah Seymour ... you have captured the essence of the tear, and played it vividly in this mind's eye. Beautifully penned! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, And you are my favarate. Sy Kit, Lovely does as lovely is, Thank you lovely. |
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