Open Poetry #15 |
The Borders of Our Minds |
Kit McCallum
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Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
The Borders of Our Minds As mayhem reigned and grief unfurled, A cry rang out around the world; We watched the devastation rise, We heard the pleas, the fear, the cries. Atrocities of lurid height, Devoured all, through tortured fright; No border could contain the dread, That flowed beyond the blood that shed. We saw the pain too close at hand, That reached across a nation's land; No lines were drawn through tears we shed ... Reality had reared its head. We saw reflections of our own, Through every face of missing shown; A friend, a neighbor, loved one flashed, Amongst the news of aftermath. For though surreal, we realized, ALL borders have been compromised; It's at our door, it's at our feet … This terror that we rise to meet. America is not alone … Her borders stretch beyond her home; Across the sea, across the land … United in her cause, we stand. /Kit McCallum - Ontario Canada |
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Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Never have I been prouder of our Canadian friends...so many of you standing tall with US... thank you... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kit, You are my kind of poet. Excellent |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Kit, well said and well done. You speak my mind as well, for in unity we will stand strong. It hits home hard for anyone, and you captured my sentiments exactly in your wonderful poem. ~*Be Kind To Your Fellow Man, Lend Him A Helping Hand, Put A Little Love In Your Heart*~ |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I've always considered our Canadian neighbors to be fellow Americans... I'm proud to call you my American sister, dear Kit.. |
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Denise
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This is wonderful, Kit. Thank you. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice words Kit....James |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
superbly done my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
We saw reflections of our own, Through every face of missing shown; A friend, a neighbor, loved one flashed, Amongst the news of aftermath. For though surreal, we realized, ALL borders have been compromised; It's at our door, it's at our feet … This terror that we rise to meet. America is not alone … Her borders stretch beyond her home; Across the sea, across the land … United in her cause, we stand. =================================== thank you for this sweet poetess of the North... as I told Parker earlier...I have been very touched by the show of support from fellow Nations and countries... it is quiet comfort.. the whole world has been touched and changed by this act of terror...its pain knows no borders or equators. So good to see your smiling face here Kit-gator jm Well I looked to the sky for my anthem |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
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yes, yes, yes, we have to stick together, forget our own internal differences and fight this war, and I hate to say it but I know there will be one. Kathleen |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Just a beautifully penned piece of support Kit ~ Thanks for this. Bonnie |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kit~ Thank you for reaching out to share the grief with compassion~ We unite with friends all over the world to mourn the losses~ Each voice makes us stronger~ Thank you for yours~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Kit McCallum
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Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Thank you everyone. I had flown down to the States myself and was there all last week, in Virginia and West Virginia on a business trip. We eventually took a very long car ride home Friday to return to Canada. I was heartened by the show of warmth and support across the country through our drive. There were flags made of lights in house windows, flags on cars as we drove, flags on houses, and signs along the road ... it has touched us all, whether our home is inside or outside of the US border ... |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Thank you and your home for it's continued outpour of support. The sincerity has touched my heart in ways that will never be bordered up again. Love and Peace. Sincerely, Regina |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
What a beautiful offering of compassion and support, Kit. You pen your heart very well. We all grieve and hold tight to faith and the power of good. Thank you for this!~ Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
An excellent expression, thank you! "Let me pierce the realm of glamour |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Beautifully written Kit ... you've captured the heart of Canada for sure |
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oh2beme Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 215NV USA |
Oh Kit....it's been too long since I have seen your work...once again, you are one awsome woman and I commend you...Deb |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Thank you, Kit. No, there are no borders between friends that stand together..we are all the same |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Evil now knows no borders, neither good. It is heartening to see the world respond with outpouring of support. We know who our friends are....friend. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Kit- Thank you for this beautiful and uplifting write. Hugs, ~Vicky "...God WILL bless America and we shall overcome together" ~vlraynes |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Thank you, again, for a fantastic write. The title alone, is superb. Melton |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Thank you everyone. My heartfelt sympathies and prayers continue to go out to all affected by this tragedy ... Much appreciation, /Kit |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
A beautiful poem, and it expressed exactly how I feel. Thank God for our good neighbors. |
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