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Sometimes I Miss Her
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Sometimes I Miss Her |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sometimes I Miss Her Months and months have now passed and I still don't know why she kissed me like that. She was the best kisser I have ever kissed. Her kisses never ceased to amaze my lips. They got my attention that much I know. Her kisses had a way of transforming me right to the place I wanted to go. They drove me absolutely wild but they relaxed me also. They tucked me into bed just right and assured me of sweet dreams all thru the night. I suppose it had something to do with a meeting of two kindred spirits both possessing the same goals and a desire to kiss with abandon and passion deep from within our souls. Like a fine tuned guitar we played all the right chords. Our lips destined to meet in perfect drum beat. I never met a woman that kissed me so perfect before. One kiss was never enough I always wanted more. I'm not sure why it didn't work out. Everytime our lips met we kissed our brains out. Months have gone by since her kiss pressed to my lips. Sometimes I miss her. Who wouldn't miss the worlds best kisser? Jameslee@July17,2001 |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
One kiss was never enough I always wanted more...can sympathize with you JamesM enjoyed *s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely told James... sounds like something to miss for sure... |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Better than Hershey's. -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Only love can kiss like that. Great expression. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
indeed. . . why are some women like that??? it will always remain a mystery. . . great job James. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Ov corse. Who indeed? Well done, James. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it  |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
James, A kiss is a wonderful thing.. especially if it is with the one you love.. wonderfully expressed. I liked it  TaraB |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I read this and it brought to mind a song...dont ask me title or singer cuz Im never any good at that...but one of the lines goes...your kiss your kiss is on my list...of the best things in life....dont worry sugar...she is out there... |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Oh, you wrote so beautifully about a not so good ending. Perhaps you shall see her again Sauni Sauni :) |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I'll have to echo rose petals ..... A kiss is a wonderful thing.. especially if it is with the one you love.. Indeed! and Paula, I think that song was sung by "Hall & Oates" back in the early eighties. "little miss understood |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you all so much for the nice responses...recently I spent some time with her again...and its not the same...that was our moment in time...James |
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