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Raindrop |
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thecraig Member
since 2001-03-11
Posts 223 |
The rain drop falls & finds the place special spot crystalline grace; Where the mark lands water bursts vibrantly shifting soil & sands, then sitting soft slushingly; Sadness from above has nature not been kind? soon enough shall find purpose little tear, surely give you use advantage from your juice; Take your place upon the shore. while sea behind you roars. Wait & let the suns rays help poor spirits rise; Then drift the floating mists & tides , search on needing eyes; |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautifully done piece of writing. Very nice. |
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cruz Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 282Dallas,Texas USA |
this is loaded with substance!! youve dun a gr8 job with your rhyme and your arts flow is soothing. nice job! |
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