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Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

0 posted 2001-07-16 10:22 PM

I'd started out as a whisper
your whisper
elusive, so breathe
sprout gossamer wings
to carry you away
falling, soft like snow
lips pressed together
blow, a kiss
try to catch it
but you can't
because it's gone
in a sigh
so like me...

~Tier
7/01

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

1 posted 2001-07-16 10:25 PM

You know, I really love the way you write of a moment in your poems, you expressed yourself well in this, well done!

Melissa~

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

2 posted 2001-07-16 10:29 PM

Ahh, geez, Tier, how compelling to thoughts that was. Very nice read..Thank you...very gentle smile

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

3 posted 2001-07-16 10:48 PM

Hey,this is cool. I love this!

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

Mike
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since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

4 posted 2001-07-16 11:13 PM

very nice, enjoyed the style much. I always read a poem out loud, this reads wonderfully.
(especially in a whisper)

snowpants
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since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

5 posted 2001-07-16 11:31 PM

Great write, Tier...love the style...I enjoyed it very much!

sp

it was love that first drew me,
it is love that will keep me here...
now I see love burning brightly
when everything else is unclear...

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2001-07-16 11:38 PM

Tiersdin~
I'm with Mike ... this reads beautifully in a whisper.
Lovely thoughts.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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JLR
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since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

7 posted 2001-07-17 02:19 AM

I will agree with Melissa. You can take moments from time...and live them in words that when I read them, I live also.

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

8 posted 2001-07-17 02:54 AM

I'd started out as a whisper
your whisper
=============

I loved the openeing lines sooooo much .....and Mike and Marge are right.....
One can whisper it wonderfully......

Thank you
**************************

It's only me.......only me
I hope that would suffice eternally

{{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}}

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2001-07-17 04:09 AM

Very nice...James

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

10 posted 2001-07-17 07:51 AM

well now RT... I certainly hope you are not gone...

as usual you capture well the moment and the feel... love to read your words..

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

11 posted 2001-07-17 09:47 AM

to catch a soft sigh
to receive the blown kisses
just open your heart

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

12 posted 2001-07-17 09:50 AM

oh my
it's gone
in a sigh

what a gentle, yet powerful image here

RMW
Senior Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

13 posted 2001-07-17 09:56 AM

Soft.

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

14 posted 2001-07-17 07:31 PM

I would say that you are far more than a sigh my friend. . .

this is wonderful. . . truly delicate. . . another from the "Queen of Romance". . .

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