Open Poetry #15 |
Love Deserts Me |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
The light in my heart just dimmed As dark sorrow invaded my mind You left me betrayed and deserted How could I have been so blind? Another broken heart Seems commonplace to me these days The sun it may be shining But I don't see a single ray My soul has been all but crushed Since you left me for someone else It seems that you have grown tired of me As you left me stranded all by myself Maybe the problem I have Is that I have too much love to give For me love is the ultimate Such an important reason to live Once again I'll wish for a love To one day come my way That will fill my heart with happiness And take my sadness far away Suetang |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Sue...heartaches are way too common...I hope you find a love..I enjoyed this even though it is sad.. alan |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
I've had my share of heart ache, I know how you feel. With time the heart does go on and you'll meet someone new and fall in love all over again. Hopefully this time that person will truely appreciate you : ) |
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cruz Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 282Dallas,Texas USA |
"...and you give, and you give, and you give yourself away..." U2 With or Without You your poem is very well written, and may your heart get well soon |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Big hugs, from another who knows the pain of heartache. I got a dog instead Take care, and your poem was excellent as usual. ~*Be Kind To Your Fellow Man, Lend Him A Helping Hand, Put A Little Love In Your Heart*~ |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
A sad poem, but hoping that true love comes to you in time. Joyce |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sometimes one is ready for love and they meet someone that just wants to play around...James |
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