Open Poetry #15 |
Every Bit Of...Dedicated To Sven |
Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Every Bit Of... There's just something about a man who writes from the heart When pride set aside leaves others to smile For, his mind starts walking and his heart begins talking And, we read the words and rest within them awhile... He's every bit of beautiful as a dove in flight Every bit of graceful as an angel in air For, he rises beyond, the almighty sun And, we find peace from the words he's willing to share... He's every bit of kind as the new day at dawn Every bit of loving as the stars at night For, he rises high, above any sky And, we become lucky to witness the words he writes... He's every bit of strong like the cool winds in the fall Every bit of warm as a summer day in July For, he stands true, like the flowers in bloom And, we find strength in his words here before our eyes... He's every bit of familiar as a child to his mother Every bit of pure as a snowflake in white For, he finds the ways, to brighten our days And, we become blessed with his words on into the night... He's every bit of wonderful beyond any sunset seen Every bit of lovely as a new morning starts For, he holds the words, we all have heard And, we become fortunate to feel his awesome heart... Sauni Sauni :) |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Yes..he is every bit of that, indeed! You're a sweetie for posting this, and a wonderful poet in the way you say things. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Awwwwww! Sven will love this! And yes he is all that and much more! Since I adore him and since he is my friend, I thank you for writing this for him Melissa~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
What a lovely tribute to someone who gives so much to everyone at this poetry site, and you did an excellent job, he will just loe this I am sure~kudos on a wonderful poem. ~If you have a choice to sit down or dance, I hope that you dance~ |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Yes, he is every bit of that... well done, Saunni... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely words...James |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Saunni, this is just too wonderful!! Thank you so much my friend. . . I'm very touched that you would honor me with such wonderful words from your heart. . . I will treasure them always my friend. . . --------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
He is every bit of that ... and MORE! Wonderful tribute to a fine poet! |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
yes, he is and more...how sweet of you...beautiful poem...helen |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
He is all that indeed! Great poem! |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Temptress~ Thank you for saying I am a wonderful poet. You are as well! Melissa Honeybee~ You were right, Sven did like it I'm so glad he did. Mysteria~ Thanks for taking the time to read this. It means a lot to me. Lady In White~ Indeed he is Thanks for reading this poem. James Michael~ Thank you James for stopping by to read and comment. I appreciate it. Sven~ What can I say? I'm glad you liked this poem! You add so much to this poetry site. What a true and loving heart you have. You are one of a kind, so don't ever change, My Friend. Interloper~ Thanks a million for reading and responding. 1Slick_lady~ Thanks, I just felt he needed to know how great he is. Walker~ Thank you Walker for reading this and commenting. It's so appreciated. Sauni :) |
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SILLY WAWCHEO Junior Member
since 2001-07-06
Posts 13Mighigan |
Saunni, you make everything in life sound magical... |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
SILLY WAWCHEO, I am only magical because you are magical, My Friend. You bring so much to my life. I thank God for you always. Sauni Sauni :) |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
I've read Sven's work, and I enjoy it all just as I enjoy your poem here. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
.....and every bit as talented. Thank you, Saunni, for this lovely tribute. Liz |
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