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A Second Chance
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A Second Chance |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida 
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In memory of John Suarez, my ex-boyfriend. I am praying for those who were injured and/or lost their lives today. My heart goes out to everyone who has lost someone! If I had a second chance I'd re-do all I've said and done Tragedy struck in a split second And now you're gone It goes to show that every minute is priceless My thoughts are shaken up By the thought of your body sprawled lifeless Time is a precious gift Memories can't be purchased at a store I don't want to accept the fact that I won't see you anymore Never again will I hear you voice Or reach out and feel your touch You meant the world to me but I never showed it that much I can't believe I lost you Without a single warning sign This has given me a wake up call For all the times I was blind If I had a second chance to see you And one last thing to say I'd tell you that your life was a gift that you shared with me each day Even though without you life doesn't seem worth livin Still I'll go on And fulfill the life I've been given If you were here You would tell me to be strong To never look back Only forward, and move on I wish I would've shown you more love but now it is far too late You are in heaven now with the angels Rest in peace my sweet soulmate Im sorry... I wish I could have a second chance Now I'm aware that sometimes you only get a first chance <3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3 |
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Masked Intruder
Moderator
Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
Very touching and thought-provoking dedication, Joanna. You can't wake a person who is pretending to be asleep. -- Navajo Proverb |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
I am so sorry.. You have written a beautiful poem. |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
No Words to touch your pain....... <<< Crying>>>> ~Connie~ |
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GhostWriter_6 Member
since 2001-09-03
Posts 237??Amityville?? |
very beautiful.. very well written... very powerful... if anybody who has had someone and lost them this poem will resurface some feelings... well done 1, GhostWriter_6 |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Thank you everyone..You all are the best friends a girl could ever ask for. I appreciate each and every one of you. Let's continue to join hands and hearts in this sad time. <3 RP |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
~Time is a precious gift Memories can't be purchased at a store I don't want to accept the fact that I won't see you anymore~ (((warm hugs)))  My prayers and thoughts are with you Charisma |
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