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Future Holds |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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The future holds a memory Record scratches, turn back time Let the jukebox spin and spin I only wish I had a dime Someone pushed the buttons in Jammed the jukebox in its place Now it comes through satellite Somewhere from an outer space If change were good I’d have a dime The pin would drop into my pain The future has a different look The record plays a last refrain By: Lose® |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Oh Walt this is excellent. Nice poweful first stanza!! ((hugs)) <3 RP |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
spin and spin. . . great job walt. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Put another nickel in... Play that song again. There's comfort in that which is familiar... Well done, walt.. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Walt~ This is wonderful, my friend~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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cruz Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 282Dallas,Texas USA |
this is very original. i like how you left it alone. the following is perfekt: If change were good I’d have a dime The pin would drop into my pain The future has a different look The record plays a last refrain By: Lose® quite cr8ive |
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